Love Poem for a Beach Baby

by Jennifer on May 1, 2012

I brush your golden-yellow curls, soft and wispy and fuzzy like wind-swept clouds, with my fingertips as you lay facing me ready to drift off to sleep.

Sounds of waves and chirping sea birds fill our room, artificial but they help you sleep, and the breeze from the fan caresses our skin.

I look into your heavy-lidded eyes as they lose focus and begin to close, translucent sea glass, the blue of the ocean, their interiors flecked with little bits of sand.

You are my beach baby.

From your hair that is my sunshine to your eyes that are my sand and water,

From your toes that are wiggly little sand crabs to your laugh that dances on the wind like so much sea spray,

You are made from the bits and pieces of the place I am happiest and most at home.

In your face, in your eyes, in your toes and hair and soft smushy skin that emits a sun-kissed glow, there exist all of the elements that reach into my soul like so many jellyfish tentacles tickling the various parts of my memory and painting this picture for me.

When you have laughter in your eyes, they flicker and flash like the light reflecting on the surface, bouncing and dancing across the waves of your curls, a rippling current around your head.

When you cry, I taste the saltwater that flows down your little round sand dune cheeks as I kiss away your tears.

We were meant for each other, in the endless ebb and flow, the eternal give and take.  Sometimes you crash against me in anger and frustration, only to wrap your arms around me, gripping tightly, forever pulling me back to you.

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Pish Posh May 1, 2012 at 10:54 am

I like the soft smushy skin description and the memories she etches in your mind :)
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:43 pm

Thanks! I’m glad you could come by.

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Robbie May 1, 2012 at 12:40 pm

beaches and babies..2 of my favorite things. such descriptive language…beautiful and heart tugging.
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:44 pm

Thanks Robbie. Mine too ;-)

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Greta May 1, 2012 at 2:20 pm

Sigh. I love it.
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:45 pm

Thanks Greta. Glad you could come by.

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Natalie @MamaTrack May 1, 2012 at 2:35 pm

What a lovely poem. I’d say you are all pretty lucky to have each other!
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:41 pm

Thanks Natalie!

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kristin @mondayswithmac May 1, 2012 at 3:02 pm

That was very sweet. Thank-you for sharing.
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:40 pm

Thanks Kristin

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stephanie May 1, 2012 at 3:40 pm

Lovely. Your children are lucky to have you as their mom. They are much loved.
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:40 pm

Thank you Stephanie. I can’t imagine a better compliment.

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Keeping Time May 1, 2012 at 3:47 pm

I could see this as a children’s book. It’s so sensory and beautiful. What a treasure!
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:39 pm

Thank you. I’d have to come up with some lift-the-flap options so it would be entertaining for my toddler ;-)

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Kim Pugliano @The G is Silent May 1, 2012 at 3:54 pm

Tears! I get it!

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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:38 pm

Thanks Kim. Glad you could come by and thanks for commenting.

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Julie May 1, 2012 at 4:42 pm

I am gleefully in LOVE with this. It’s so beautiful. This one you print out and save for the baby book.
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:37 pm

Thank you Julie. I think that’s a great idea. Of course that means I’d have to actually work on the darn baby book at some point.

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Mayor Gia May 1, 2012 at 7:47 pm
Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:36 pm

Thanks Gia!

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Sarah May 1, 2012 at 9:08 pm

Beautiful, beautiful words for your beach baby. Thank you for sharing them!
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:35 pm

Thanks Sarah. Glad you could stop by!

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Kindred Adventures May 1, 2012 at 9:41 pm

I second, third, fourth and fifth… Just beautiful and moving! Love it!!

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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:35 pm

Thank you so very much.

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WilyGuy May 1, 2012 at 11:39 pm

Brings back memories of grandma’s house at the beach. Nice.

WG
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:34 pm

Thank you! I’m totally obsessed with those cute unicorn pictures by the way.

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TriGirl May 2, 2012 at 1:45 am

I love the beach, so knowing that your baby is your tie to the beach makes me happy for you–very sweet post :)
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:33 pm

Thank you!

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christina May 2, 2012 at 9:47 am

BEAUTIFUL

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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:32 pm

Thanks Christina!

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Sisterhood of the Sensible Moms May 2, 2012 at 10:35 am

Babies and beaches are two of my favorite things and you captured the beauty of them in the most lovely way with your words of adoration for your child. Ellen

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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:32 pm

Thanks Ellen – Two of my favorites as well…in case it wasn’t obvious. :)

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Louise Ducote May 2, 2012 at 12:05 pm

Wonderful! Posts like these are going to be treasures for your children to have later.
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:30 pm

I hope so. Either that or they’ll make fun of me for being so mushy ;-) Thanks for coming by and commenting!

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Delilah May 2, 2012 at 3:44 pm

That was beautiful. I loved every single part of it!
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:30 pm

Thanks Delilah!

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Michelle Longo May 3, 2012 at 6:55 am

Loved it! The description of the eyes closing – I love watching that, you captured that so well. And the last lines were perfect!
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:29 pm

Thanks Michelle. It’s always such a sweet part of the day, watching him drift off to sleep. Thanks for reading and commenting!

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Abby May 3, 2012 at 9:17 am

Oh, this post makes me ache. For the beach, for the tide, for a baby…beautiful. Thank you!
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:28 pm

Thanks Abby. If only I could manage to transport the aforementioned baby to the beach, life would be just about perfect.

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Megan Lawing May 3, 2012 at 9:26 am

This was SO precious. I can totally relate. It just makes me so sad to see my little boy growing up, but also so happy and excited to see him learning new things too. Great poem. Well done.
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:27 pm

Thanks Megan. It’s bittersweet, isn’t it? I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

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Kristin May 3, 2012 at 3:28 pm

Just wonderful! I love this line especially:

From your hair that is my sunshine to your eyes that are my sand and water,
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:25 pm

Thanks Kristin!

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Stephanie Precourt May 3, 2012 at 3:34 pm

Beautiful.

Steph
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Mommy May 3, 2012 at 9:24 pm

Thanks for coming by and reading!

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